This week we’re completing our narrative writing. To help us edit and improve our stories, what can grab the reader’s attention from the start?
An amazing story opening. For example, “Where’s papa going with that axe?” said Fern to her mother as they were setting the table for breakfast.
I love the opening to this story. What opening of a book really inspires you and explain why?
I am a venomous vorpent and my sting is as deadly as a black widow spider i have already stung one of the characters . (i hope he’s not your favourite.) the curse has come upon him!
Nathalia’s dad has been embarrassing her since the day she was born.For instance it’s his fault that she has the world’s worst surname, Nathalia Buttface.
Which book title is this Emer? Why not ask Essi what book he’s reading as he was on the blog and I wonder if the netbook crashed…
my name is sapphire battersea.dosent that sound beautiful.
I disappeared on the night before my twelfth birthday. July 28 1988.
Beast quest Tusk the mighty mammoth rules the rotting forest of Gorgonia
Hamtaro is very brave he once saved Penelope from a hungry cat ! (They are hamsters).
I love dragons
Cressida Cowell is the best author ever😄😃😀☺️😉😊
once upon a foggy day a cold ,cold country long long ago, seven small Viking boats floated through the sea-known-as-wooden’s-bathtub.
Neville the devil
We were pulling in to a motorway service station for a widdle-and-fodder break when i had this sudden feeling we were in for a bad time.
welcome to the universe’s most mathmatical guide to the land of ooo
Demond dentist byDavid walliams
im going to write the first couple of scentanses
Alfie hated going to the dentist.As a result the boyws teeth were almost all yellow.The ones that wernt yellow were brown.They bore the stains of all the goodies that children love but dentists hate.Sweets,fizzy drinks,chocolate.The teeteeh that vwere neither yellow nor brown simpily wernt thair any more.They had fallen out.One had bitten into a toffee and stayed there.Assorted fruit-flavord chews had claimed others.